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Thursday, February 19, 2015

Someday Crop: A Sestina

 Today she labored in the garden which includes
  meticulously buried seeds in mounded rows
  with signs on sticks to signify this someday crop
  of radish, lettuce, broccoli, and all the like
  ‘neath warming sun, a place well known by keen eyed birds
  which, in the past, would stop here once her plants did sprout.

  As history reminds, the healthy seeds should sprout
  just as before, with signs of spring, that would include
  a gentle sun that melts the frost and hungry birds
  that flock about the tender shoots aligned in rows.
  But well you know that circumstances seem more like
  mere happenstance when planning for a veggie crop.

  She waters all the seeds sown in this someday crop
  and calculates what time might pass before they sprout.
  She reads the weather page but finds she doesn’t like
  hypotheses of climate change, for such includes
  her space, her land. It could, no doubt, destroy the rows
  she’s planted, leaving naught for her nor myriad birds.

  For she supports the predilections of these birds,
  that silently flock to this place to taste the crop
  the swell of tender shoots along the many rows
  is glorious. She tugs at weeds so up will sprout
  the robust produce to be canned. The list includes
  tart relishes and chutneys that her neighbors like.

  Hat in hand, she peers with arms akimbo. She’d like
  hues of green; there’s still only brown, much like the birds
  she wonders why they’ve stayed away, if this includes
  the migrant types, not yet arrived to eye her crop
  of fresh spring greens, of course, that is if such should sprout.
  She shields her eyes, surveying dearth among the rows.

  In evening news the candidates are lined in rows
  by left and right (and centrist types). Some seem to like
  to stay the course, they have no plans that fully sprout.
  Their status quo Kyoto take: “It’s for the birds.”
  She wonders if they understand a someday crop
  cannot endure the indecision that includes

  Ignoring trends and more than that, crises that sprout,
  that spurn advances by the birds. Her soil includes
  a battlefield, a raging war with this, her crop.

                      Laura Dvorak


1 comment:

  1. A good poem and my hat's off to anyone serious enough about the art to try a sestina. I like poems that act locally and get nudged almost as an afterthought by something political and larger. The balance is right, the interjection is casual and there is a nice tone of wistful/whimsical resignation/reaction. If that makes any sense.
    My only criticism is you might have gotten too wrapped up in the iambic hexameter. A strong show, but the poem didn't need it, and I felt like you paid the price in a couple places. The combination of that with the required repetitions of end words got a little sing-song. Thanks for posting!

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